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You may not read French. This is how you check the work anyway. Every translation from Words We Trust comes with a short record, in English, of the decisions behind it: the terms chosen and on whose authority, the editorial calls, and the questions the source text raised. Below is an illustrative record for a typical humanitarian response plan. It contains no client text; every terminology decision in it is drawn from our published Humanitarian Coordination System EN–FR Mini-Glossary.
Translation Decision Record
1. Reference frame applied
- Your 2025 HRP French version and the 2024 HNO French version (terminology carried over unless superseded below).
- OCHA’s stated French preferences for coordination terms; UNTERM; the French versions of IASC guidance.
- Reference works: none needed beyond the above for this document.
- Register: formal institutional French; sentences shortened where the English stacks three subordinate clauses, because the readers include non-native francophone field staff.
2. Terminology decisions
Only decisions a reader could reasonably question, or that depart from a common rendering. Routine terms are in the glossary, not here.
| Source term | French used | Also seen / rejected | Why, and on whose authority |
|---|---|---|---|
| Humanitarian Coordinator | Coordonnateur ou Coordonnatrice de l’action humanitaire | « Coordonnateur des opérations humanitaires », « de l’assistance humanitaire » | OCHA asks for this form in texts that refer to the function. The doublet is OCHA’s own; not shortened to the masculine. |
| Humanitarian Country Team (HCT) | équipe de pays pour l’action humanitaire | « équipe de pays humanitaire », « équipe humanitaire de pays » | The two rejected forms appear in older documents and are explicitly not to be used. |
| OCHA (as a name) | OCHA, written « l’OCHA » | « BCAH » | The French acronym BCAH was discontinued in 2012 at OCHA’s request and must not appear in official documents. Your 2025 HRP still used BCAH twice; corrected, see section 4. |
| cluster (sectoral group) | groupe sectoriel; « Groupe Santé » etc. for named clusters | « cluster », « Cluster Santé » | Official form kept because this is a high-level, published document. « Cluster » is common in field usage; if you want the field form for internal versions, say so and the glossary will carry both. |
| Joint Operations Centre | Centre d’opérations conjoint | « centre d’opérations civilo-militaires », « centre d’opérations commun » | The first rejected form was superseded in 2013; the second is a mistranslation that still circulates. |
| WASH | eau, assainissement et hygiène (WASH) | « EAH » | The acronym WASH is kept in French; UNICEF asks that EAH not be used. |
| Inter-Agency Standing Committee | Comité permanent interorganisations (CPI) | « inter-organisations » | No hyphen in the official form. |
| surge capacities | renforts mobilisables | « capacité de montée en puissance », « moyens supplémentaires » | This document uses the term for staff deployment, hence « renforts ». The alternatives are correct in health-system or budget contexts and are noted in the glossary for those uses. |
| System-Wide Scale-Up | intensification à l’échelle du système humanitaire | « urgence de niveau 3 », « L3 » | The L3 designation was replaced by the Scale-Up mechanism; the source text still says “L3” in one place, see section 4. |
3. Editorial decisions
| Decision | What was done | Why |
|---|---|---|
| Gendered forms | Institutional doublets kept where the institution uses them (Coordonnateur ou Coordonnatrice; coordonnateur résident ou coordonnatrice résidente). No inclusive point (·) anywhere. | Matches OCHA and UN Secretariat practice; the point form is not accepted in UN French documents. |
| Acronyms | English acronyms kept where French usage keeps them (HRP, HNO, OCHA, WASH, OSOCC), expanded in French at first mention. | Readers move between the English and French versions; matching acronyms keeps the two aligned. |
| Document titles | « plan de réponse humanitaire 2026 pour [le pays] », following the naming pattern for this country. | Standard pattern; three countries use « plan d’aide humanitaire » instead, which does not apply here. |
| Numbers and currency | Non-breaking space as thousands separator, « millions de dollars É.-U. » in running text, USD in tables. | UN French editorial practice. |
| Sentence structure | Fourteen sentences split in two. No content removed. | Source sentences of 60+ words with nested clauses; readers include non-native French speakers. |
| Quotations from the HNO | Taken from the published French HNO, not retranslated. | Consistency with a document already in circulation. |
4. Source-text queries
Points in the English that are ambiguous, inconsistent or out of date. The French follows the reading stated below unless you tell us otherwise.
| Location | Issue in the source | What the translation does | Your decision needed? |
|---|---|---|---|
| Section 2.1, para 3 | “L3 emergency” used although the mechanism is now System-Wide Scale-Up. | Translated as the Scale-Up term, with a comment in the file. | Yes: confirm whether the English should also be updated before publication. |
| Section 3, table 2 | Row for “Logistics cluster” gives a lead agency different from section 3.2 text. | Translated as written in each place; both flagged. | Yes. |
| Section 1.4 | “affected people” and “people in need” used interchangeably in two paragraphs, although the figures differ (2.1 M vs 1.6 M). | Kept the distinction in French (personnes touchées / personnes dans le besoin) and matched each figure to its term. | Please confirm the figures. |
| Throughout | Your 2025 French HRP used « BCAH » twice and « équipe humanitaire de pays » once. | Not carried over; corrected forms used. | No, unless you want the 2025 text left as is for continuity. |
5. For your French-speaking reviewer
Where a reviewer may prefer a different form, and why the choice was kept. This section exists so that reviewer comments can be resolved in one round.
| Item | Likely reviewer preference | Why the delivered form was kept | Change on request? |
|---|---|---|---|
| « groupe sectoriel » | « cluster », as spoken in the field | This is a published, high-level document; the official form is expected. | Yes, for internal versions. |
| Doublets « Coordonnateur ou Coordonnatrice » | Masculine only, shorter | This is the form OCHA requests. | No. |
| Split sentences | Restore the English sentence length | Readability for non-native readers; meaning unchanged. | Yes, if the reviewer prefers. |
6. Consistency assets updated
- Project glossary: 38 entries, of which 9 new (attached).
- Translation memory updated; export available on request.
- For the next document: the L3 / Scale-Up point and the Logistics lead-agency inconsistency should be settled in the English before the French of the monitoring report is started.
Method note: choices are made and documented using named translation procedures (Vinay & Darbelnet; Delisle), so that every departure from a literal rendering can be explained and repeated.
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